Falling Down the Well
Ricky Garni is a graphic designer. His latest short work publications can be found in Softblow, Poetry Quarterly,and Unfold. He is currently working on a 12-book collection called OK You Can Stop Now and a tiny book called Toothbrushes. Once a month he teaches poetry to seniors at Covenant Place in Carrboro NC.
Falling Down the Well
By Ricky Garni
singing a song
of secrets
you made up
on the way down
singing a song
of secrets
you made up
on the way down
Posted by Annmarie at 2/5/2012 11:29 PM 
Categories: today's words
Tags: Ricky Garni well falling song secrets
Categories: today's words
Tags: Ricky Garni well falling song secrets
a nice ride...
Thank you!
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I love this poem. It is difficult to say why in clumsy prose that cannot do justice to such a short cipher that is so long on mystery. If someone today asks me what is poetry, I will show them your 15 words.
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I like this!
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I love succinct writing and when you can do it in poetry it makes us want more.
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