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• 3/15/2011 4:33 PM Jeanette Cheezum wrote:
  Wow! A dirt nap. Such passion.
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  1. 3/17/2011 6:00 AM Monica wrote:
     Well, I do come down on the side of famine... Thanks for the read!
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• 3/15/2011 6:36 PM David Tarrien wrote:
  This poem aches and yearns and engrosses -- Monica has a rare talent to tap in to a primal place -- magnificent!
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• 3/16/2011 8:52 AM Sharon Poch wrote:
  "So you should never mind the berries."
  Evocative and poignant. May we all "taste the earth."
  Thank you for writing and sharing, Monica.
  Sharon
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  1. 3/17/2011 5:58 AM Monica wrote:
     Thank you, Sharon.
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• 3/16/2011 3:47 PM Sophie B wrote:
  I loved it! I liked the part about naming him after a king.
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• 3/17/2011 2:00 PM Jeanette Gallagher wrote:
  This brought back a memory for me, evoking raw emotion. Provacative. Great poem!
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• 3/17/2011 3:05 PM Alison L. wrote:
  One of my favorite parts: "You could have thawed a smile or served a kind word to an old blouse." I loved it.
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• 3/19/2011 12:44 PM Monica wrote:
  Thanks to one and all for the comments!
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