Blue morning breath
breezes in a hurry,
tangles my hair as I take sun
dried laundry off the line;
bury my face in sapphire
striped sheets, the clean smell
tickles lungs, tingles
down to wiggly toes, almost
like the first time you kissed me.
You said I had the poutiest lips,
plump plum puckered and ready.
Laundry line quivers, windy
sheets ripple around me, like arms
clinging to my trembling body;
faded jeans fall past thick thighs,
knobby knees, brass buttons
on hardwood like the clink,
clink clank of loose change
hitting the walls of a metal
dryer, spinning hot
heavy breath burrowed beneath
sweaty hair stuck to the back
of my neck.
Your energy pounces quietly,
shakes me dizzy and out of breath
grasping soft cotton sheets.
I think amazing says it all. I'll never look at laundry the same way.
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Terrific work
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Ian, your word choice, aliteration, pace, line breaks, and unobtrusive rhyme make this poem powerful, indeed. Thank you!
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Yes, I agree with the above comments!
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Wonderful! Wow!
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