Annmarie Lockhart, editor of vox poetica, has been reading and writing poetry since she could read and write. A lifelong Bergen County resident, she lives two miles from the hospital
where she was born.
Robert CJ Graves is from Kansas. Can't you tell that by the way he insistently takes us to Oz and back in his poems (Queen Learjet, The God of Apathy, Look for Jack Buddha, No Swimming)? This poem does not disappoint. It skims us through the arc of a relationship, just sketching the story, allowing the telling details to speak for themselves.
9/17/2010 10:47 PM
Jeanette Gallagher wrote:
I loved your wonderful poem. Sort of took me back to our first apartment 3 flights up and new love with new husband just beginning to practice law. A beautiful story baked in the oven and stays in my heart. Thanks,Robert. Reply to this
This is wonderful.
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I love the whimsy of this short, but powerful poem.
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Hi, Robert. Good work, as usual.I love the last two lines.
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Thank you for your comments.
Best wishes, and happy writing!
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I loved your wonderful poem. Sort of took me back to our first apartment 3 flights up and new love with new husband just beginning to practice law. A beautiful story baked in the oven and stays in my heart. Thanks,Robert.
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