Canary
Sandy
Benitez spent her childhood traveling the world as a military brat. Her
poetry has appeared in over 100 print and online poetry journals such
as Contemporary American Voices, The Clearfield Review, Tinfoildresses, Elimae, Full of Crow, Lung Poetry Journal, and Loch Raven Review. She currently resides in Wyoming with her husband, 2 children, and 2 chocolate labs. Her first book of poetry, Ever Violet, has been published and you can find out more about it (and her other ventures) at her blog.
Yesterday Stan gave us crows and today Sandy gives us canaries, but you
know these poems are not about birds. Read this and consider image and
metaphor and language. What bird would you choose for metaphor?
Canary
By Sandy Benitez
Nine months, I carried a little
canary in my womb. Flapping
wings in slow motion, steadily
growing in a birdcage of pink
tissue and blue bars of veins.
Exhausted, I lay in bed. Welcomed
silence, that old friend. Together,
we perched our attention
on the gentle sweep, the fluttering, tiny
earthquakes, ribbons of waves
roll across the terrain of my
abdominal hill. Not a natural disaster;
natural perfection. I knew when
she was ready, she would leave
the cage. I would meet her, touch her,
hold her for the first of hundreds of times.
Hear her voice. Song of my heart.
Canary
By Sandy Benitez
Nine months, I carried a little
canary in my womb. Flapping
wings in slow motion, steadily
growing in a birdcage of pink
tissue and blue bars of veins.
Exhausted, I lay in bed. Welcomed
silence, that old friend. Together,
we perched our attention
on the gentle sweep, the fluttering, tiny
earthquakes, ribbons of waves
roll across the terrain of my
abdominal hill. Not a natural disaster;
natural perfection. I knew when
she was ready, she would leave
the cage. I would meet her, touch her,
hold her for the first of hundreds of times.
Hear her voice. Song of my heart.
Posted by Annmarie at 12/3/2009 11:37 PM 
Categories: today's words
Tags: sing await Sandy Benitez canary love pregnancy
Categories: today's words
Tags: sing await Sandy Benitez canary love pregnancy
Beautiful, just beautiful.
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Yes, beautiful.
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Amazing! This is real, alive with love.
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