Breathing
Shelby Breen is a gifted writer in many media, but her poetry is especially good. This is an example of a well-formed, interdisciplinary poem. Shelby is a student in New Jersey and you will be seeing more of her great work on these pages and elsewhere in the future.
Breathing
By Shelby Breen
Huff puff, huff puff
Your lungs are at work
Inhale exhale, inhale exhale
Oxygen is flowing
In out, in out
Getting rid of carbon dioxide
Warm cool, warm cool
In little clouds of breath
Red blue, red blue
The color of our lungs
Breathe in breathe out, breathe in breathe out
You can't see it, but it's there helping you live
Breathing
By Shelby Breen
Huff puff, huff puff
Your lungs are at work
Inhale exhale, inhale exhale
Oxygen is flowing
In out, in out
Getting rid of carbon dioxide
Warm cool, warm cool
In little clouds of breath
Red blue, red blue
The color of our lungs
Breathe in breathe out, breathe in breathe out
You can't see it, but it's there helping you live
Posted by Annmarie at 7/15/2009 9:23 PM 
Categories: today's words, student's writings, vox poetica originals
Tags: science Shelby Breen
Categories: today's words, student's writings, vox poetica originals
Tags: science Shelby Breen
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I loved writing this poem, it was a fun creation. I like that people can read what I love to write.
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Shelby, this is exactly what vox poetica is for! I am honored to be the first publisher of your work, and looking forward to putting a lot more of your poems up for people to read!
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awesome shelby I LOVE IT
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